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Learning activity

Peer workshop: Personal essay for creative writing

Get students to critically evaluate their own and their peers’ personal essays and reflections with open-ended comments.
Created by:
Alayne Petersen
University of Wisconsin–Oshkosh
Pedagogy
Collaborative Learning
Learning outcome
Collaboration
Prep time
Intermediate (10-30 min)
Activity type
Learning Activity
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Why this learning activity?

Learning activities targeting high-order skills like this one can help you activate students more effectively. This learning activity will help you with:
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Feedback Literacy:

Students will effectively give, receive, and apply feedback to enhance their learning and performance.
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Collaborative Learning

Students will collaborate with peers, communicating and cooperating to achieve shared learning goals.
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Critical Thinking

Students will analyze information, evaluate evidence, and make reasoned decisions in problem-solving contexts.
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Activity setup

Peer workshop: Personal essay for creative writing

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Activity steps

  1. Read instructions: Go through the instructions to understand the activity requirements.
  2. Submission: Students submit their personal essay according to the requirements.
  3. Self-assessment & peer review: Utilizing a comprehensive rubric, students evaluate their own work and then provide actionable and constructive feedback to their peers. For this assignment, there are comment and rubric criteria configured.
  4. Rating and Reflection: Alongside providing feedback, students are also tasked with rating the feedback they receive from their peers (feedback-on-feedback). Additionally, reflection is key to the learning process. Students will be invited to reflect on the entire experience, focusing on what they’ve learned and how this activity has contributed to their growth.
  5. Feedback Release: Student’s  feedback, along with their peers', will be released following the assignment deadline. This ensures everyone has ample time to engage with and learn from the feedback provided.
  6. Grading: Instructor grades the students based on configured criteria and weighting.

This activity uses Peer Review to get students to critically evaluate their own and their peers’ personal essays and reflections with open-ended comments and rubric criteria.

Rubric

The rubric included in this activity focuses on two core criteria that reflect increasing levels of proficiency in:

  • Proofreading: Assesses grammar, punctuation, spelling, and formatting, ranging from significant errors that disrupt readability to drafts with few or no mistakes.
  • Length: Measures whether the draft meets expected page requirements.

In addition, there is a comment-only section encouraging reflective feedback on:

  • Hook: The piece’s ability to capture reader interest with a compelling opening.
  • Apparent Subject: Clarity of the topic or surface-level content.
  • Deeper Subject: The presence of underlying insights or learning moments.

This rubric combines clear, behaviorally anchored scoring with qualitative commentary, supporting students in producing polished, well-structured writing while fostering critical thinking and peer review skills.

Activity goals

This activity helps facilitate a flipped classroom approach to your teaching. When student engage with material prior to class there are several benefits:
  1. Read instructions: Go through the instructions to understand the activity requirements.
  2. Submission: Students submit their personal essay according to the requirements.
  3. Self-assessment & peer review: Utilizing a comprehensive rubric, students evaluate their own work and then provide actionable and constructive feedback to their peers. For this assignment, there are comment and rubric criteria configured.
  4. Rating and Reflection: Alongside providing feedback, students are also tasked with rating the feedback they receive from their peers (feedback-on-feedback). Additionally, reflection is key to the learning process. Students will be invited to reflect on the entire experience, focusing on what they’ve learned and how this activity has contributed to their growth.
  5. Feedback Release: Student’s  feedback, along with their peers', will be released following the assignment deadline. This ensures everyone has ample time to engage with and learn from the feedback provided.
  6. Grading: Instructor grades the students based on configured criteria and weighting.

This activity uses Peer Review to get students to critically evaluate their own and their peers’ personal essays and reflections with open-ended comments and rubric criteria.

Rubric

The rubric included in this activity focuses on two core criteria that reflect increasing levels of proficiency in:

  • Proofreading: Assesses grammar, punctuation, spelling, and formatting, ranging from significant errors that disrupt readability to drafts with few or no mistakes.
  • Length: Measures whether the draft meets expected page requirements.

In addition, there is a comment-only section encouraging reflective feedback on:

  • Hook: The piece’s ability to capture reader interest with a compelling opening.
  • Apparent Subject: Clarity of the topic or surface-level content.
  • Deeper Subject: The presence of underlying insights or learning moments.

This rubric combines clear, behaviorally anchored scoring with qualitative commentary, supporting students in producing polished, well-structured writing while fostering critical thinking and peer review skills.

Learning Activities Used

Peer Review

Stimulate lifelong learning with peer feedback

In this activity

  • There are 2 sections of feedback grading with 2 rubric criteria and 3 comment criteria, you can easily add, remove, or edit these sections to match your institution needs.
  • Self assessment is turned on and is visible side-by-side with the peer feedback. 
  • Feedback writing tips are turned on with 8 tips configured, you can adapt this to your assignment or course. 
  • Add guiding instructions for your students such as a review checklist.
  • Feedback Coach is turned on to help students improve their peer/self reviews.
  • Feedback-on-feedback is enabled in order to encourage reflection on the quality of peer reviews. 
  • Required reflection length is 50-250 words, you can adjust this to match your institution needs.
  • Reflection coach is enabled to help students improve their reflection quality.
  • Configure grading to match your desired weighting.

Notable settings

Anonymity
Reflection
Grading

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